Ouch! My brain!

Just made it. I was really stuck on this one. I put in a voice-over, not sure if I'd keep it, just using it as a scaffold, to make sure the story stayed focused on my new main character. That got me so far until the narrative began to drift from the outline, leaving me to hack it out in the script. Brain's wrung out; they should put pictures of it on packets of screenwriting as a caution to others.